Novel Competition Long List Finalists

iStock_dandelion.jpgListed below are the finalists for the 2008 Novel Competition.  The novel extracts were selected by our story readers as work that displayed a high level of highly structured writing that amply demonstrates an understanding of the writing craft, producing clear, descriptive narrative set in an interesting tale.

It was a tough decision and those manuscripts that were not included in the long list may have only missed out because the standard was indeed so high.

We have added a few comments given by the readers to highlight what made the extracts memorable and gave them their strength.

Please note that the long list is not listed in any particular order.


The Crow Painter's Wife
                                   Gripping, engaging and moves at a cracking pace
The Chapel of Her Dreams                                Tense, atmospheric writing
A Dubious Alliance                                            Indulgent, enjoyable and well written
Rock Street                                                       Emotive, descriptive and insightful
Viper's Blood                                                     Dramatic, powerful writing
Finding Faith                                                      Interesting and appealing
Colonial Bride                                                    Beautifully descriptive
Truly Blue                                                          Good, engaging tale with a gentle streak of humour
Devil's Chimney                                                 Effective detail, good dialogue, snappy story plotline
Pointing Starwards                                           A bloody good read
Putting the Pig Away                                        Nicely told, narrative authentic and engaging, flows easily
Haggard Gentle                                                 Confident, bold writing, intense, extremely well written
Remembering the Dead                                    Great opening chapter, strongly atmospheric
Pablo's Egg                                                       Powerful, painful, a voice that deserves to be heard
Blessed Are The Meek                                      Great opening, dramatic, handled with aplomb
Fezes of Fantasy                                               Very well written, strong opening chapter
In The Beginning                                               Gripping, intriguing
The Adventures of Comet Sweat                    Distinctive voices, enjoyable, vivid
The King's Storyteller                                      Excellent story, expertly written, well rounded
Saving Grace                                                    Good story, flows nicely, intriguing, fresh, breathtaking
Sunday's Child                                                 Warm, readable, engaging tale
Broken For You                                                Detailed descriptions, confident, crafted writing
Fiercer Than Any Flame                                   Complex tale handled with confidence and aplomb
Godfather Death                                             An interesting tale, well written, strong prose
The Keeper and The Monkey                           Brilliantly articulated, strong writing style
Small Acts of Love                                          Superb, the writing is stupendous, as is the sheer quality
Entropy                                                           Slow moving but effective
The Greatest Reason                                      Likeable characters, a good read
Spoiling for Trouble                                         Reads well, lightness of writing
The Resurrection of Danny MacNamara         Interesting plot, portrayed effectively 


The next Novel Competition has the deadline set at midnight on Sunday 28 February 2010.  The new rules and entry details will appear on the website along with submissions which will be accepted from Thursday 1st January 2009.

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